Sindarin haiku

A Sindarin version of a haiku by Tomas Tranströmer, this year's Nobel prize laureate in literature:
Anor pâd tovon.
I morchaint vín hi neryth.
Fergar panath lûm.
tovon: I feel that this "Ilkorin" form is better fitted to the phonology of 3rd age Sindarin than the Noldorin tofn
*panath 'all' = 'everything', collective plural from the adjective pân, modelled on siniath from sein
Anor pâd tovon.
I morchaint vín hi neryth.
Fergar panath lûm.
tovon: I feel that this "Ilkorin" form is better fitted to the phonology of 3rd age Sindarin than the Noldorin tofn
*panath 'all' = 'everything', collective plural from the adjective pân, modelled on siniath from sein