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Let's haiku

PostAuthor: órerámar » Fri Aug 30, 2013 8:45 am

After this exceptionally long winter, when I went over the Grimsel Pass at the end of June, there was still lots of snow and the ice in the mountain pools only started to break up:

Ringwe tuilesse -
natse nenye tieron
tulca helcesse


Mountain pool in spring
a net of watery ways
on strong ice


Rilya ringwesse
i lilótie naltar
Fanyamarello


On (the) glittering mountain pool
the manyflowered reflections
from Cloudland
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Re: Let's haiku

PostAuthor: Aran » Mon Sep 02, 2013 10:25 pm

This reminds me of a song where autumn puddles are called 'weeping sky beneath one's feet'.. In any case, after the Omentielva I felt the urge to clean up my haikus and update my website. On the theme of ice I have:

Aiwi vilyasse
Hya terene helkenna:
En úrahtime


'Birds in the sky
Or on thin ice:
Still unreachable'

Written last year, when I saw some birds being fed by the local inhabitants, perching on paper-thin ice on the Elbe which could hardly support more than a light bird and a few breadcrumbs.
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Re: Let's haiku

PostAuthor: Lúthien » Tue Sep 03, 2013 6:59 am

Wow, these are both wonderful!

I was wondering whether you had read out the haiku's on the Omentielva, or only read them?
I'm asking because it would also be great if we could listen to the poems. At least, I find that wonderful, though I understand that maybe it's too much bother to record it, upload it, etcetera.
It's just a thought.

I might also try to write some more haiku's: I find the form very stimulating (both restrictive in meter, and short).
Would it maybe be better therefore if we move this topic to a general forum (not in the Quenya forum, I mean)?

@Aran: do you live near the Elbe? My friend and I cycled along the Elbe to Prague two years ago, so I may have passed the place you describe :)
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Re: Let's haiku

PostAuthor: órerámar » Tue Sep 03, 2013 7:36 am

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Re: Let's haiku

PostAuthor: órerámar » Tue Sep 03, 2013 7:49 am

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Re: Let's haiku

PostAuthor: Lúthien » Tue Sep 03, 2013 8:04 am

Oh, I'm sorry: I wasn't clear (I guess that comes from posting messages before coffee :) )

I meant recording the poems published in here only, by the authors themselves.

(I think I jumped there from imagining them being read out at the Omentielva)
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Re: Let's haiku

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Re: Let's haiku

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Re: Let's haiku

PostAuthor: órerámar » Thu Sep 19, 2013 9:18 pm

Change of season in the mountains:

Yaxi autear
nu telme hísiéva
quilde nanwéna


Cows are leaving
under a hood of mistiness
silence returns


Quelie úva -
henetso cilinenna
aiwe tambea

Automne draws near -
on the window's glass
a bird keeps knocking
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